16 November 2020

My fantasic holiday

This post is written by Aisha

This post is to share my learning about I have been learning to. To show what I have learned, I have created I have trying to remeber what I have done in the holidays



Something I enjoyed about this learning was Everything. Something I found tricky about this learning was figureing out how to remeber what I did and ate.

Down on the bottem

1 comment:

  1. I enjoyed reading your story Aisha. I hadn't eaten dinner when I read this so it made me very hungry reading about the delicious food. You also have used punctuation well especially capital letters and full stops. That's what good writers do. Next time perhaps you could write a sentence to say what tasted the best.

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