This post is written by Namoe
I have been learning to How to rewrite a story. To show what I have learned, I have created A story
https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1j04I9l4HQY-bLRhWYdv6kSeeJZra_frX7mFQrCviVQs/edit#slide=id.g9383eb1f49_0_1
Something I enjoyed about this learning was Rewriting it cause it fun and I enjoyed it alot. Something I found tricky about this learning was Words to put in and where to put full stops.
What should I work on to make my story better?
1 September 2020
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Well done for sharing on our Blog Namoe. Make sure you watch the video carefully to see how to insert you DLO so that we can see it.
ReplyDeleteI am glad you thought it was fun. See you back at school soon.