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Our class has been learning to to retell storys. To show what I have learned, I have created Writing
Something I enjoyed about this learning was watching the video. Something I found tricky about this learning was remembering what to write down.
What would you do if you went camping and a monster came out and scared you?
24 August 2020
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Mahi pai Tafa
ReplyDeleteAnother example of your amazing online learning tasks.
You are really excelling. You are putting in so much effort with all your tasks and setting a great example to the rest of Room 1 of what you can achieve while continuing to work hard from home.
You have used some interesting words in your writing and used time connectors. Exactly what our focus was. Keep up the excellent work Tafa.
Kia Ora Room One,
ReplyDeleteThis is an fantastic outblowing story. Your words you used were very percise so I can see you're doing a great job on doing this. I have an advice, I think you should screenshot the story so people could see it better but this story had a spooky vibe.
-Ema From EHS
Thank you for commenting on our class blog Ema. It is nice to see that others are interested in the work we are doing. You have great advice and it is good for our class to hear it from the older children at school.
Deletehi Tafa blog is nice see you all on monday
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